DEVIL AND THE DEEP SEA
mind..you perverted freak..
why are you so erratic..so fanatic...
filthy, twisted schemes..you conjure without motivaiton..
but getting one positive thought from you requires training..your conscious cultivation...
dreams...your deadliest, most corrput weapon..
illusions of an oasis...wonders seem waiting to happen...
eventually you make him commit his first, the 'last' crime..
he seems convinced, isnt life after all about the 'peace of mind'...
eons have passed, but no sanity or humanity did you bring..
in your defense, do you wish to say a thing...
ask that not..you gloomy, meek heart..
you've been jealous, zealous, luscious, callous..right from the start...
you make him a fanatic..why blame me for perversion..
victim of your desire he becomes...why blame me for self destruction ...
biased affections, random obsessions you produce..
to a puppet,incapable of any decision he is reduced...
love, your ultimate curse in disguise..makes him see orgies of delight..
had you made him free of expectations, his future would have been so bright...
eons have passed, but no compassion and brotherhood did you bring..
now, in your defense, do you wish to say a thing...
the altercation continues..conjecture upon conjecture..
eternity has gone by, they still blame each other for his failure...
and in this saga, he has won nothing...has nothing left to lose..
if only he had a third option..
for between the devil and the deep sea..never could the poor man choose...
why are you so erratic..so fanatic...
filthy, twisted schemes..you conjure without motivaiton..
but getting one positive thought from you requires training..your conscious cultivation...
dreams...your deadliest, most corrput weapon..
illusions of an oasis...wonders seem waiting to happen...
eventually you make him commit his first, the 'last' crime..
he seems convinced, isnt life after all about the 'peace of mind'...
eons have passed, but no sanity or humanity did you bring..
in your defense, do you wish to say a thing...
ask that not..you gloomy, meek heart..
you've been jealous, zealous, luscious, callous..right from the start...
you make him a fanatic..why blame me for perversion..
victim of your desire he becomes...why blame me for self destruction ...
biased affections, random obsessions you produce..
to a puppet,incapable of any decision he is reduced...
love, your ultimate curse in disguise..makes him see orgies of delight..
had you made him free of expectations, his future would have been so bright...
eons have passed, but no compassion and brotherhood did you bring..
now, in your defense, do you wish to say a thing...
the altercation continues..conjecture upon conjecture..
eternity has gone by, they still blame each other for his failure...
and in this saga, he has won nothing...has nothing left to lose..
if only he had a third option..
for between the devil and the deep sea..never could the poor man choose...
Thoughts of Victim Of Desire at
9:46 PM
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he's deaf...wish he cud hear u!
...wonderful lines, punit...the anguish stands out effectively..
been here after a long time...feels nice to be here...
P.S. my results r out..scored a distinction(71%) and got placed at blue star infotech yest :)
i dint find u on orkut as yet :(
Awesome buddy! Very well-written. Totally understand the dilemma!
Woahaa..this is pretty neat..saale kahan se lata hain sab?
Love is no mere curse its a blessed curse. Its well written .
arey, mera comment post nahi hua kya??
anyway, I found it little difficult to understand at first attempt.
Achcha likha hai.
"in this saga, he has won nothing,has nothing left to lose"...Nice!
Bohemian: Hey, nice to see you back..and you are a scholar..getting 71% in BE is too good...forget the aggregate..my summation for all the 8 sems in engg. was not 71%..hehe..i sucked badly...
good luck with your new job and everything...and welcome to the real world... :)
Hardy: Nice to see you man...and if you liked it then i am happy coz you are something like a benchmark that i would compare my stuff with...
Sachya.. tujhe nahi batane wala woh...bhool ja..
Mrinmayee: Arey tera koi comment mila hi nahi iske pehle...maine tujhe kahan tha na ki thoda abstract hain..lekin glad that you like it...waise only the one line that you liked..".left to lose.." is lifted from the U2 song "with or without you.." Infact that is the line from where this whole idea came about..
Anon: Glad you commented for the first time on my blog...*happy*
hey Punit,
I am Mrinmayee's sis. I am not sure whether u know me or not, so thot of introducing myself. I hv been reading ur posts from couple of days(Hope u dont mind my peeping). U write pretty well.
BTW Good poem!
Mrinal
Mrinal: Hey, Sachin told me about you...I know that they all had come to your place a couple of weeks ago..and no, I do not mind you peeping in..thats what blogs are for...and am happy that you liked it!! i must say that i really like your graduation picture (the one where you are jumping) on vishal's blog...
have fun :) ....
hey,
Thanks for that pic compliment. Vishal and his camera has made my graduation day very memorable! :) BTW do u mind if i add a link to ur blog on mine?
Mrinal: Sure.. :)
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