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Friday, November 18, 2005

Ready to Rumble

There'll be bad times, surely will they cause frustration..
everything will seem unresaonable,baseless..without any foundation...
your 'once upon a time' happy mind will try to escape..
wierdest of thoughts would merrily take shape...

you should give up on everything..just run away..
your heart will say..
who has cared for you anyway...

confused mind will yell..

why dont you become a loner, a non compliant..
you are already a psycho, become totally defiant...

may be you should start taking drugs..
the Satan gestating in you will suggest..
you should begin to drink..
extinction isn't far, you are already on the brink...

your heart will swear..nobody should you ever console..
everybody should go to hell, why should you care about a soul...
misery and pathos will go hand in hand..
your mind would become their fertile land...

to yourserlf you will say...
there's no point in being an achiever..
I should stop being a believer...
no one can understand my plight..
to prove what and to whom, should I now put up this fight...
I will get away from this world's cruel ways..
Survival will be possible on the memory of my good old days...

at one time or the other..
thoughts like these will surface, my brother...
facing the darkest cloud of miseries unknown..
you'll struggle, to once again be your own...
your heart and mind will be in a strife..
while the 'opponents queen' creates havoc in this chess called life...

but if you will still be good..
if you'll wish joy and spread happiness like you always could...
if all these negative thoughts, your mind will crumble..
if you'll never stumble, if your character remains humble...
then, you are prepared for this jungle called life, My Son..
you are a Man now, you are ready to rumble!!

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Anonymous Anonymous said...

Damn..another good one..you are getting good at it. I can think one of govinda's dialog fits this situation.."Tere pyaar mein kya kya na bana Meena..kabhi bana .."

10:48 AM  
Blogger Victim Of Desire said...

hehe...sale gandu!!! chalo..woh hi sahi.....kuch to bana...

12:45 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

STOP THIS AT ONCE PUNIYA.... U R GETTING TOO CLOSE TO MY THOUGHTS NOW... IT MAKES ME UNCOMFY... i dont wanna hear 'em...... go back 2 more mundane & siily stuff u used 2 share..... remember buddy IGNORANCE IS BLISS....

6:40 AM  
Blogger Victim Of Desire said...

pakya, now that i read this post back with you in mind, it does seem to have that 'thing' that can affect you...it should hit you hard...coz some things match so much, dont they??? but its good that I can atleast write something that can affect you...coz my speaking didnt...but whatever...things will change buddy...days like our good old days will be back...nothing is going to take us down...coz

WE ARE FOR REAL...

btw, i thought you would comment on my previous two posts, but not seeing your comment, i thought maybe you didnt have time to check it...anyway...i would like to know how u atleast liked my effort??

3:16 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

u mean 2 say u really thought up n wrote tht stuff.... all by urself..... sach sach bol beta.... kidhar se dhaapa hai...... tell me the truth..... i'm finding it a bit hard 2 digest tht these words r ur brain's invention..... if it is ..... buddy its the equivalent of attaining MOKSHA..... u have been enlightened..... and tht means ur new life has begun...... n if its dhaapoed... well then i'm relieved (whew!).... aftr all bhagwan se dosti bhi tension or dushmani bhi..... pls say u reproduced it frm somewhere.....

3:09 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

sob! sob! .... whose the author or authors buddy..... nice poems..... bt the last one's the best.... kaun likha yeh sab......

3:15 AM  
Blogger Victim Of Desire said...

abe sale yeh sab maine hi likhi hain....the 'bard' in me has finally arisen...hehe... sale tujhe meri capabilities par shak hain, huh?? tu hi to mera saccha yaar hain..tujhe bhi bharosa nahi hian?? hehe..... :-)

Next time I will put a 'copyright' and 'All Rights reserved' symbol for every thing I write...

9:05 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Thank God!.... ab mujhe yakeen ho gaya ki yeh sab tuney nahi likha hai..... tabhi main bolu... yeh tere dimaag ki ijaat kaise ho sakti hai..... tere paas toh dimaag hi nahi hai :) aur yeh sirf main hi jaanta hu.... kyunki tera saccha yaar jo thehra..

P.S. arrey yaar .... bataa toh sahi uss mahaan kavi ka naam, piyenge uske naam ka ek jaam, iss duniya ka nahi uska dhaam, aftr all.... aise shayar ka dharti pe kya kaam. (thank u! thank u!)

4:05 AM  
Blogger Victim Of Desire said...

dekh...jab tere jaisa gadha aisi 'char laina' likh sakta hain, to phir mein kyon aisi poetry nahi likh sakta....btw, good lines...mera sahi mein dharti par kuch bhi kaam nahi hain....

7:59 AM  

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