Will you..
One beautiful fall day, you walked unknowingly into my life..
that magical smile on your child-like face...
GOD, you are an awesome artist, I had sighed..
seeing those lovely eyes, sheilded by innocence's embrace...
Before I knew, I started talking with you..
for endless hours together, in my mind...
didnt know why, I had this gut feeling..
that finally, i have found someone of my kind...
Heart and mind decided unanimously, the truth was never more clear..
'this' was nothing but love...
how else could I explain those feelings..
I never realized existed in my minds lost alcoves..
This surge of crazy hormones..
I've never experienced before...
even when your faintest thoughts start taking shape..
happiness comes knocking on my door...
You like me too...
this, your demeanor can't refute...
there is some sparkle when you talk to me...
about that, there is no dispute...
You mean everything to me now..
How much i love you, you have no clue..
But I 'm afraid of making the move, I dread losing you..
Will you please come and let your eyes say the words, "Yes, I do..."
that magical smile on your child-like face...
GOD, you are an awesome artist, I had sighed..
seeing those lovely eyes, sheilded by innocence's embrace...
Before I knew, I started talking with you..
for endless hours together, in my mind...
didnt know why, I had this gut feeling..
that finally, i have found someone of my kind...
Heart and mind decided unanimously, the truth was never more clear..
'this' was nothing but love...
how else could I explain those feelings..
I never realized existed in my minds lost alcoves..
This surge of crazy hormones..
I've never experienced before...
even when your faintest thoughts start taking shape..
happiness comes knocking on my door...
You like me too...
this, your demeanor can't refute...
there is some sparkle when you talk to me...
about that, there is no dispute...
You mean everything to me now..
How much i love you, you have no clue..
But I 'm afraid of making the move, I dread losing you..
Will you please come and let your eyes say the words, "Yes, I do..."
Thoughts of Victim Of Desire at
3:08 PM
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hey puneet, that's a nice piece of rhyming poetry coming straight frm da heart...intermixed wid intense feelings of luuuuuuuuuv!
i guess, most maudlin confessions are made amidst the robes of a dulcet silence...
Should I tell her??????????
Bohemian: Three things.
1) I agree. Silence speaks much more than words. No second thoughts about it.
2) I never realized that this was 'intense' as you say!!! Actually I dont think I can write very intense stuff like you guys..
3) Most Important: It's Punit not Puneet :-)
Hey!
This is great stuff. I think you're kinda underestimating yourself when you say "I can't write intense stuff".
Goblin: this is imagination. Tujhe pata hain in reality there is no her :-(..and this was not about the 'her' that you were referring to ;-)...i know you won't believe it though...do what you feel like...you know the result though, dont you???
point noted,puneet...oops...punit!
...and pls shed off that garb of modesty...u r damn cool wid ur poetry.hope u r aware of that urself!
Sandy: howz it goin, buddy...visited your blog often, but your blog had this dry spell this last one month..good to see you back!!
Bohemian: I have noted the point that you noted my point ;-)...and thanx for your appreciation..but there's no garb that i m wearing..its what I think is the truth!! Anyway, howz your exams coming along??
Hey punit,
It’s not you who is writing, but the girl inside you. I can say for sure, no human can pass by without this feeling.
realist: there is no girl 'inside' me!! i am a MAN, head to toe...hehe...but yeah, 'very few' people can pass their life without this feeling...good that you finally commented on my blog..:-)
I agree with Sandy. This is great stuff. Like your style! And yeah ... don't underestimate urself. Just write wat u feel.
Hardy: man, this stuff is nothing compared to what you can write...if you didnt know this by now, plz be aware that i am a fan of your writing!! And yeah, I am def. going to read 'The Kite Runner' next week after exams get over...suggest me some other 'dhasu' ;-) books...
hey dint know ur exams r on.
all da very best for that!
mine's getting done on 12th..last paper's left...papers were ranging frm ok-ok to gr8!
dude..poetry was excellent!!..and i know the intended audience for this poetry...don't make fool of yourself..and cut the shit off!
"Direct Dil Se"... "Coming straight from the heart"
Cool stuff!
Hope luck was in ur favor...
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