Fading away...
This bond between you and me..
sadly, but surely , we can feel it slowly dying...
this rotting of camaraderie, both of us can see..
I can only wish our minds were lying...
a laughable misunderstanding..
you go first, why should I go...
wishing, wanting, willing, demanding..
venomous thoughts spat by satan wearing this garb of ego...
we need no pretence..
you know we know each other too well...
but maybe we demanded too much..
of what though, none of us can tell...
droplets of pain seep out now with every thought..
how, a dying friendship, is what years of affection bought...
WHY did we become apathetic to each others existence..
WHEN did the genuine care and concern turn into resistance...
i'm sure, years later, looking back on 'our' past..
you, like me, will let out a sigh..
and regret..why, by not caring, by just letting things flow..
we plundered our lives..
like that lovely candle died of an erronous blow...
sadly, but surely , we can feel it slowly dying...
this rotting of camaraderie, both of us can see..
I can only wish our minds were lying...
a laughable misunderstanding..
you go first, why should I go...
wishing, wanting, willing, demanding..
venomous thoughts spat by satan wearing this garb of ego...
we need no pretence..
you know we know each other too well...
but maybe we demanded too much..
of what though, none of us can tell...
droplets of pain seep out now with every thought..
how, a dying friendship, is what years of affection bought...
WHY did we become apathetic to each others existence..
WHEN did the genuine care and concern turn into resistance...
i'm sure, years later, looking back on 'our' past..
you, like me, will let out a sigh..
and regret..why, by not caring, by just letting things flow..
we plundered our lives..
like that lovely candle died of an erronous blow...
Thoughts of Victim Of Desire at
1:13 AM
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Victim, I think I need a lot more time to understand you as a person. It seems that you analyze lots of things in life - even the subtle ones. But you portray yourself as just another ch*tiy* - like me:).
venky: Venky, I agree..I hope one day comes when I can define myself in black and white. Amen.
your lines touched upon old wounds...old hurt revived...
this one's ur best till date, punit...
this ones so much on the lines of one of my poems too..
will post it soon..
well said, well thought, well put...
saale kutte...purane jhakam phir hare kar diye...bahut lagi yaar..direct dil pe..oouch..
Rajasi: This poem seems to have revived past hurt in more than one person. Apologies to all. But that also means that I am not the only one who is going/has gone thru this. And btw, thanx for your appreciation. My best friend also told me the same about this poem...
Kedar: Will love to read your version..post it soon
Sachya: lagegi to sahi..direct dilse aayi hain...tayariyan shuru kar mere swagat samarambh ki... :)
Nice one... looks like it came "Straight from the heart".
This feeling so rare
Dunno if its fair
kiske judai se teray dil se yeah aah nikali hai, tujhe kya pata is dard mai hee shayad teray gam kii dawa hou
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